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A POINT OF NO RETURN


When I looked into your eyes,
I could see the pain.
And I could tell
That I was the cause of it.

But I know myself too well.
I could not apologise.
I could not sacrifice that
Inflated ego of mine.

I knew that the fault was mine.
But I was too proud
Or maybe too scared
To admit that I could be wrong.

I let you leave without a word.
I tried and I tried
But the words did not come.
I saw the last turn that you took.

Slowly you faded away
Into the distance-
Far, far away…
Too far for me to get you back.

The distance was created long back.
But this feeling was so new.
Maybe I could still make amends.
But I stood numb as you left. 

Comments

  1. Rimbaudian effect with Brownian ending... good one :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot for having compared me with such stalwarts...

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  2. no unnecessary flowery adornments, very direct, very sincere, very from-the-heart..a-must when u r addressing the topic in hand..:)

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  3. A teary eyed speechlessness has left me numb at this hour... Extremely touched!

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  4. Thanls for this comment...It will inspire me to write better...

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  5. an intense emotion nicely portrayed through beautiful words

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